This World ~ Feedback
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Re: A Story ~ Feedback
by Shai'tan » Sun May 23, 2010 7:09 pm
I agree, but I think I'm gonna change it to This World for now, better than A Story...
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Re: This World ~ Feedback
by Shai'tan » Sun May 23, 2010 8:04 pm
New chapter out, tell me what you think! 
Also edited some of the first chapter, nothing big though...
Also edited some of the first chapter, nothing big though...
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Re: This World ~ Feedback
by atomtengeralattjaro » Sat Aug 14, 2010 2:27 pm
Continue! with whatever title you see fit.. As far as i'm concerned, it could be entitled "Shai's story that will probably have a title someday", it's a good story regardless.
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