Story time! ....?

[dewero]

Took you long enough

[hobobuster]

Okay so, the formatting on forums like this aren't very appealing to the eye for story writing, so I used a seprerate site.

I will have it linked in this post, for easy access, and will keep it in my sig for yall to have easy access. And I'll let you know when it has been updated with a new chapter. Keep in mind you'll have to click on the Prologue button/link from this page (this page is just the book description, author info, etc), and continue from there. There will be a button at the bottom of each chapter to move onto the next chapter.

Anyways, comment there or ere, and let me know what you think. THANKS!

The all powerful link o.o: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/hobobuster/837505/

[THEBOMB12321]

Will do!

[dewero]

Yay!

[hobobuster]

Thank you bomb for your comment on there, I greatly appreciate it!

[atomtengeralattjaro]

wow, this looks interesting. i like to read longer stuff in print though, besides, i spent all yesterday reading stuff on the screen so i'll print the first chapter and read it later. Probably with the next chapter or something, depends on when are you going to continue The prologue is really good. I mean really.

[atomtengeralattjaro]

Doublepost of Bump,

should i move this to Art?

[Anonymously Famous]

It would probably fit in art. Then again, so would the weather photography thread.

[atomtengeralattjaro]

yeah but this is actually a discussion of Hobo's story, and i think it should stay that way.

[Anonymously Famous]

Sounds good.

By the way, hobo, I'll get to reading what you have up there so far sometime this weekend.

[hobobuster]

Thanks guys for taking the time to read it, and I just uploaded the second chapter, so check it out!

As far as moving it goes, it's fine with me however you want to do it, I started it here because I wanted people to see it, not many frequent the Art section, but if it needs to be done, its not a problem! Lemme know

[atomtengeralattjaro]

it's already in Art, but there is a shadow topic in General still. (that redirects here)

[Dreams]

Ninja topic?
And wow! That story is actually really really really really really good! I fail super hard at writing, so you are super super good

[hobobuster]

Ninja topics are THE most dangerous of all topics. And thanks for the comments, i appreciate it. Also thanks to you all whom have signed up there to leave ratings and reviews!

[atomtengeralattjaro]

anytime tell us when the next chapter is up!

[hobobuster]

Will do. May be a bit. Still having a bit of writer's block, but I have an outline. So maybe a day of rest or two can help.

[atomtengeralattjaro]

"I can't wait to read this book!"
"Yes you can!"
"Yeah.. I guess you're right.."

[Anonymously Famous]

So I wasn't able to get any reading done over the weekend... Computer issues that are still being resolved. But I will read and give feedback. Eventually.

[Dreams]

on no... that sucks. I hate computer issues. WELL, after a long and relaxing winter break, I'M BACK!