FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

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Do you read FLIGHT?

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FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby cyan » Sat Aug 14, 2010 12:25 pm

This is where we can discuss my story, FLIGHT. Comments are welcome. If you find any grammatical errors in the story just let me know; also if you're confused about something in the story you can tell me.

I'm planning on making FLIGHT into a novel. I encourage you to read it but it's fine if you don't like it. You'll help me make it a good read for many different audiences.

Regards, asdfkumquat
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby atomtengeralattjaro » Sat Aug 14, 2010 1:26 pm

Do you want this topic to be moved to Lores and Tales (like Shai's This World ~ Feedback)?
Or should just this discussion thread be linked into the first post of Flight?
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby cyan » Sat Aug 14, 2010 2:14 pm

It would be nice for this thread to be linked to my story, thanks :)
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby atomtengeralattjaro » Sat Aug 14, 2010 2:22 pm

done. I'd suggest you to link the story to this thread too, like "This is where we can discuss my story, Flight", or "read it here", or something like that.
I know, I know, i should stop bitching and start reading :)
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby cyan » Sat Aug 14, 2010 2:24 pm

lol, that's fine. I really appreciate your help.
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby Ml08180 » Sat Aug 14, 2010 2:28 pm

I shall read, but not right now. We have to go some place to get some thing in a few minutes. I'm pretty sure it's costco for groceries...
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby Arkannine » Sat Aug 14, 2010 3:46 pm

I love Flight :DDD
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby cyan » Sat Aug 14, 2010 3:46 pm

yay :DDD
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby atomtengeralattjaro » Sat Aug 14, 2010 4:10 pm

smiling yellow headed person dee dee!
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby Flying Sheep » Sat Aug 14, 2010 5:19 pm

Omg you got Chapter 2 up. :D Did you still want that critique I said I would do?
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby cyan » Sat Aug 14, 2010 7:09 pm

Of course!

News: I'm working on Chapter 3 now and I have a good start :)
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby Flying Sheep » Sat Aug 14, 2010 7:46 pm

Myeh, well I got plenty of time now, so I should do it now... But Heroes of Might and Magic is too fun... >.<
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby cyan » Sat Aug 14, 2010 7:48 pm

Sounds like a nerd game.
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby Flying Sheep » Sat Aug 14, 2010 7:50 pm

It is sorta >.<
It's like a strategy thing, but it's really fun.
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby cyan » Sat Aug 14, 2010 7:51 pm

Well, I understand. I have my Sorcerer.
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby Flying Sheep » Sat Aug 14, 2010 7:52 pm

Sounds fun. If I can force myself to stop playin Heroes, then I'll do your thingy... >.<
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby cyan » Sat Aug 14, 2010 8:11 pm

Please do!
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby Flying Sheep » Sat Aug 14, 2010 8:22 pm

*sighs*
All right...
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby cyan » Sat Aug 14, 2010 8:41 pm

Thank you :D
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]

Postby Flying Sheep » Sat Aug 14, 2010 8:44 pm

Trying to write it now... >.<
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